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I awoke from a daze,
And what did I see?
A girl in the glass,
Who looked strangely like me.

We may have been twins,
Almost but not quite.
I thought my eyes were the sky,
But hers were of night.

I thought my face was full,
But there were hollows in her cheeks.
Wasn't I flushed and rosy?
She might not have eaten in weeks.

My hair was soft and smooth,
Hers a forest, thick and wild.
My teeth shone, her lips were cemented,
It seemed she never smiled.

I thought I had curves,
She was just skin and bones.
Wasn't I healthy and strong?
She could use a good home.

I pondered and questioned, "Who could you be?"
She replied, "I am what's true.
You've created a lie,
And I'm the real you."
Do not use my work in any way without my permission. ©2011-2012 ~its-a-yetti
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Brinasaur Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Hobbyist
WOW! That's really good! I like the story.
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PsychoArtist2 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011
For some reason its seems a little spooky.
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its-a-yetti Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yup. that was the point. waking up and realizing what you've hidden from yourself.
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PsychoArtist2 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012
nice.
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